Student letter

Hier mein Student letter . würde mich über Kritik und verbesserungsvorschläge freuen.

Dear host family,

I’m really grateful that you will give me the chance to live one year in the USA with you which is my biggest dream. I’ve chosen the USA because the culture is absolutely different from the European. I think that it’s great to get to know a different country, its culture and its people. It would be great to learn all these things by an American family. Since my sister become an exchange student in 2010, it is my biggest dream to spend a year in the USA. And now I would really like to learn about special American traditions like Halloween and thanks giving. Here the USA is known as the “Country of the boundless possibilities” and because of that, I’m looking forward trying out new things, get to know the “American way of life” and also have unforgettable impressions.

So, now I’ll tell you about myself. My name is Calvin „xxx“, I’m German and I have short blond hair, blue eyes and I’m about 180cm tall. I’m fifteen years old but when I come to the USA I’ll be sixteen years old. I live with my family in Duisburg. Duisburg is a big city in the western of Germany and has about 500.000 habitants. I have two sisters named Chantal and Sharmayne. Sharmayne is 22 and Chantal is 24 years old. We spend a lot of time together. My relation to my sisters are very good and I really love them. Of course we argue sometimes, but we had experiences which gave us a good togetherness.

I’m a very open-minded, friendly and cheerful person. I love it to laugh and have fun. If someone is sad I try to make them happy because I don’t like sadness. Furthermore, I’m very interested in the American culture. I’m honest and accurate.

In my free time I love it to go to amusement parks with my friends. By the way I love rollercoasters. If the weather is good I love it to go swimming in our swimming pool. In addition, I love it to relax in the swimming pool and enjoy the good weather and the sun. Since I was 6 years old I play piano. It’s a big passion of me.

I’m a student in the 9th grade and I go to the „xxx - Gesamtschule“ in Duisburg. I’ve been learning English for 7 years, so I have no problem to speak English fluently, of course with some mistakes. My favorite subjects are English, painting and swimming. I don’t like French because of the grammar. Moreover, I think that my high school year will be a big chance to learn more about the USA, about myself and a very positive side-effect will be an improvement for my English.

It is important for me that you don’t handle me like a guest, but like a real family member after we get to know each other better. I will do my best to make this year great for both of us and I think that we can learn many things of each other. I think this year will be the best year of my life and I’m very grateful that you’ll be a part of this year.

I’m looking forward to getting know from you.

Yours sincerely,
Calvin „xxx“

Also ich habe jetzt mal drüber gekuckt und fand den eigentlich ziemlich gut:grinning:. Die Fehler die mir aufgefallen sind habe ich hingeschrieben, wobei das was du austauschen musst immer groß geschrieben ist. Aber ich würde es einfach mal deinen Englischlehrer lesen lassen, der hilft dir sicher gerne:wink:.

from the european ONE. Since my sister BECAME. year in the USA AND I would. Halloween and THANKGIVING (wird groß geschrieben. Of Course we argue sometimes BUT MANY DIFFRENT EXPERIENCES MADE US GROW TOGETHER. Ich würde I’m honest and EXACT for Furthermore stellen. Den Rollercoaster Satz würde ich weglassen, das klingt als wäre dir ne Achterbahn in deiner Nähe zu haben total wichtig. If the weather is good ENOUGH I LIKE to go Swimming or TO RELAX… ANOTHER BIG PASSION OF MINE IS PLAYING THE PIANO, WHICH I DO SINCE I’m… fluently , ALLTHOUGH I MAKE SOME MISTAKES. English, ART and Swimming. Den French Satz würde ich weglassen, dass klingt als wärst du darin schlecht und gibt’s dir keine Mühe und es soll ja nen guten Eindruck machen. Nach Moreover kommt kein Komma. about the USA AND ABOUT MYSELF. IMPROVING MY ENGLISH SKILLS IS A POSITIVE SIDE EFFECT TOO. Year great for ALL of us. and I hope I can learn many new Things. Dein Satz ist grundsätzlich richtig, aber kann möglicherweise so wirken, als ob du möchtest dass die sich komplett auf die deutsche Kultur umstellen oder so. you’ll be a part of IT. Forward to RECEIVING an answer from you.