Selbstdarstellung auf Englisch Feedback & Kontrolle

Ich hab eine Selbstdarstellung auf Englisch geschrieben, aber bin mir nicht sicher ob ich sie so abschicken kann. Ich freue mich sehr auf Feedbacks und Verbesserungsvorschläge!

Hello my name is *********. I’m ** years old and live with my mum and my dad in *****. I was born on ******* in Vietnam.
When I was 2 years old I and my mum moved to my father, who had been living 10 years in ******. In the kindergarden I learned german and in the 3rd class I learned for the first time english. Now I visit the 8th class and have got 1 year spanish and a little bit latin knowledge. I’m good at school particulary at the natural sciences area.
My favourite subjects are spanish, physics and sports.
I love the english language, but I’m unsure in my grammar.
This is also the reason why I want to improve my english.

In my freetime I play piano, take photos , play table tennis and I love drawing.
I also did judo and played volleyball, but I always like table tennis most.
My father taught me that when I was 7 years old.
I like drawing flowers with waterclolors and making photos of people.
Every friday I go to my kindergarden and help there mainly I entertain the kids.
I laugh a lot. My friends say that I’m always in a good mood and a open-minded person.
They also tell me that I’m very social and friendly, because I like to help people and I’m happy to see them do better.
I’m very adventurous and I love meet new people.
I always wanted to travel around the world and learn new culture.
***** ist very intresting but it hasn’t got so much nature
That is one of my reasons why I took new zealand.
I love the nature, beacause i enjoy the free feeling and the fresh air.

I have been dreaming of going to a high school and getting to know a new school sytem.
I hope that I experience many adventures, which I never forget and
I’d like to get to know a new culture with new customs and traditions
What I also would like to learn in new zealand is that I’m more independentd an more self-confident.

I hope you have got a good first impression.