Hallo
Ich hab jetzt gerade meine Selbstvorstellung für meine zukünftige gastfamilie fertig gemacht.
Ich bin mir aber mit der Rechtschreibung ziehmlich unsicher und hab gehofft ihr könnt mir weiterhelfen. Auch Verbesserungsvorschläge zum Inhalt würden mir wahnsinnig weiterhelfen.
Danke schonmal im vorraus.
Self-Intro
Dear host family,
first of all I want to thank you for reading my letter and I hope that you´ll get a right impression of me.
My name is Florian xxxxx and I am xxxxx years old. I live with my mum xxxxxxx, my dad xxxxxx and my little sister xxxxx in a little house in xxxxxxx a city situated in the south of Germany.
Currently I am in the 9th grade. At my school I have subjects like German, English, Spanish, History, Maths, Chemistry, Geography, Art or Music. My favourite subject is German, because for me its very simple to write stories and other texts. An other subject I like is history, because I am really interested in things happened before our time. Sports is a subject I like, too. My absolute hate-subject is Spanish,because I can´t remember the vocabularies and the grammar of this language. All in all I would say I am no bad pupil and school is not that hard for me.
I often meet with friends. Then we often play football, do our homework, go to the cinema or play some video games. At the weekends we often stay at each others home. For me, my friends are really important, because with them I can talk about most of my problems and I don´t have to change me for them. If you asked one of my friends, what kind of person I am, most of them would describe me as a humorous, spontaneous, sensitive and helpful person which listen to others problems. They would tell you, that I am sometimes a little bit forgetful and they would tell you, that I am sometimes a little bit crazy. If you asked my parents, they would add to my strengths my sense for justice and they would tell you that I sometimes could be very impatient. I would myself describe as a tolerant, sometimes a drop of shy and trusted person, who has a guilty if he lies.
My greatest hobby is my E-Guitar. I often play with it and I already made some songs with it. One of my friends plays keyboard, with him I sometimes play together. And I already taught my friends some chords and melodies. Sports is another hobby of mine. Earlier I plaid for years football in a club but then I finished and started playing handball, but this I finished in fall 2010, too. Currently I am dancing in a dance-school and lately I tried athletics. In winter I often go skiing or sledding. I also like to read books. I am a fan of “Metro 2033” and “Metro 2034”, the same with “Illuminati”, “Diabolus” and “Sakrileg”. The same with music, with it I can relax and lift my mood. I like Bands like 30 Seconds to Mars, Green Day and Linkin Park and I also like Bruno Mars and Bon Jovi. But actually I hear everything from classical music to punkrock.
I really look forward to my year abroad. The decision for your country was not very hard. I had the choice between your country and Czech Republic so I decided for your country and I think I won´t regret it. Actually I don´t have any connection to your country but for me it stands for the cold winters (I love winter), hard athletes and a good musical taste. It´s a big wish of mine to be a part of your culture, to learn more about your history, your family life and your interests, I want to go to your school and I want to teach you something about my own culture. This year will change as human. And I will do everything in my power to make the time nice for you, too.