vom 27.3.2016 11:31
M. W.

Mal wieder ein Gastfamilienbrief

Für einen Schüleraustausch nach SA muss ich einen Gastfamilienbrief schreiben.
Könnte den vielleicht jemand durchlesen und korrigieren?




Dear host family,

my name is xy. With this letter I would like to introduce myself. But first of all thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
I’m xy years old and a very curious person who likes to make new experiences and to meet people from other cultures.
I live in Germany, near xy together with my parents and my two brothers in a nice house with a nice garden. My mother works in a kindergarden and my dad is an engineer. My little brother is xy. He is xy years old and my older brother is xy. He is xy years old.

I attend the 10th grade. At my high school I learn the languages English, Spanish and Lateen. My favorite subjects are politic and sports.

My day normally starts at 6:45am. My school starts at 7:50am and ends between 12:30pm and 5:30pm. I drive always by bike to school
I have to spend a lot of school, because we have a lot of subjects this year.
In my spare time I do track & field. My favorite discipline is running about the middle and the long distance. Another hobby is doing something with music. I play piano and horn, but I do it only for fun. I like also singing and doing something with friends.

I hope during my time in South ‘Africa I will make new experiences and I will improve my English. I am also very interested seeing the landscape and the world of animals in South Africa. But the most important thing for me is the exchange with very nice people from another culture. I will get to know you and your family and to meet new friends at school. I want to experience the foreign school system and the daily life. During those three months I would like to experience the best time of my life. As well I would love to have fun with your family and my classmates at school.

Finally I want to thank you so much for giving me the chance to spend time with you, improve my English skills and learn about your everyday life and your culture.

Thank you for having me there.
I am looking forward to living with you!

Best regards

xy

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Hi :)

Ich gehe auch nach Südafrika :)

Mit welcher Organisation gehst du denn??

Also erstmal zu deinem Brief:

Generell schön geschrieben und auch gutes englisch außer die schon genannten Verbesserungsvorschläge!! (:

Ich würde nur noch ein bisschen was persönliches reinbringen... vielleicht eine art geschichte über dinge die dich besonders geprägt haben oder so. Vielleicht muss das aber auch nicht sein :D

LG
Kira

vom 22.4.2016 14:27
M. W.

Hi

Ich geh mit FSA-Youthexchange, eine sehr kleine Orga.
Wann fliegst du?

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27.3.2016
M. W.
Mal wieder ein Gastfamilienbrief
20.4.2016
Kira S. Südafrika Stepin 2016/17
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M. W.
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