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Hey leute, hab gerad meinen DHL fertig geschrieben, ich denke aber dass noch fehler drin sind, könntet Ihr vielleicht mal nach schauen und ihn korrigieren? Danke

Dear Host family,
First of all I would like to thank you for being interested in my documents. You may have already read a lot about me but I would like to tell you a little about me, my family and my home.
My name is Anna xxxxx, I´m 20 years old and I live in xxxxx, a small village in lower Saxony. I live here with my mother xxx(52), my father xxx (54), my brothers xxx&xxx (18) and our 10 year old dog.
At the moment I am a student at the vocational school in xxx and since 1 ½ years I am working in a video store in the evenings. In my free time I love to go for a walk with my dog in the woods around Boerger and to ride my bicycle. My hobbies are listening to music, especially rock music and alternative music, travelling, reading books and magazines and watching DVD’s and I often visit concerts with my friends. I also often go to the cinema, to the miniature golf course or to the bowling centre with my friends. So you can see that I’m a very open-minded person who loves to meet people and makes new friends.
I think I´m also a creative person, because I love to take photos, to draw pictures and to write my own songs and poems. If I have enough free time, I love to cook and to bake some cookies and cakes.
I also love to travel. Since I am a little girl my family and I had a holiday in different countries every summer. We travelled to Spain, Turkey, Great Britain, Poland, Czech Republic, Greece, Tunisia, Austria and some other countries.
I think the most striking characteristic feature of me is my humorous and funny side. I always try to make people around me laugh and get them in a good mood because in my opinion laughing is one of the greatest things and I like to be surrounded by happy people.
I´ve got my driver´s license in June 2007. Because my school is in a different town and the school bus goes very irregular I drive to school by myself every day and take some of my classmates with me. A lot of people say that I am a good and responsible driver and I think I have a lot of drivingexperience.
Since I am 13 years old I do babysitting. I think I have a lot of experience with children, because I look after 4 children since they were born. I really love to play some games or playmobil, to go for a walk with them, to read some books with them and to put them to bed. I learned how to change baby´s diapers, how to feed them and how to bath them and I think I am really good at it!
For years it is a big dream of me to visit the USA. I want to get to know more about the culture and to improve my English. I also want to meet new people and make new friends. I want to see the big cities like Los Angeles or Las Vegas and I always wanted to see the big Christmas tree at the Rockefeller Center in New York.
Now I should tell you some reasons why I want to spend a year as an Au Pair. I guess the main reason is that I really love spending time with children. I really think that there is nothing greater than to see a child smiling and laughing and enjoying that someone really spends some time with them. I would also be proud to take part in the children’s development. I am willing to do nearly everything and I am able to be responsible and serious if it is necessary.
Another reason is of course the country, I always wanted to spend time in the US and I am really curious about its cultures and traditions. And of course I hope to improve my English and get able to speak more fluently and to expand my vocabulary.
At last I want to say thank you again for taking the time to get to know me a little. I really hope you will trust me with your children and choose me as your Au Pair. This means a lot to me and I for myself will do my very best to fulfill your expectations and to guarantee a great year.

Best wishes
Anna xxx