Dear host family,
First of all I want to say thank you for reading this letter and for give me a chance to spend almost a year with you. I want to spend a year in the USA to experience the culture and to improve my English skills.
My name is ++++ and I am 14 years old now. I live together with my parents and my sister ++++ in the south-east of Germany in++++. +++ only got 4,000 inhabitants so it is a quite small village. Because our village is so small, my school is in the next village. Currently I am in grade 9 on the grammar school in ++++. My favourite subjects are: History, Chemistry and Physical Education. Some of my teachers lead the ‚Theater-AG‘ (ka in Englisch) I am in. I always liked acting and finally since one year I am in the ‚Theater-AG‘.
When school ends, you will hardly find me at home. Because schools finish in Germany at about 3 o’clock p.m., pupils have a lot of free time in the afternoon. In my free time I spend a lot of time with my friends, watching movies, playing or listening to music or go to the cinema, or I do a lot of hobbies like gymnastics. I am in a gymnastics club since grade 1 and I already won a few medals. When I am not in the gymnastics training I often jump or train myself new tricks on our huge trampoline. Additionally I play keyboard. Even if I practice a little bit careless sometimes, I have fun at playing keyboard. I also like reading. Actually I like every kind of books but I prefer fantasy-novels.
Cooking is one of my passions so I try to help my mother as often as I can at cooking.
In my high-school year I hope that I get acquainted with the American cuisine and that I learn new tips and tricks.
Eventually, I hope I could bring you myself a bit nearer and you got to know me a little.
Thank you for spending time on my letter!
Dear host family,
First of all, I want to say ‚thank you‘ for reading this letter and giving me the chance to spend almost one year with you.
I want to spend one year in the USA to learn something about (was meinst du mit erleben?) the culture and to improve my English skills.
My name is ++++ and I am 14 years old now. I live together with my parents and my sister ++++ in the south-east of Germany in++++. Only 4,000 inhabitants are living in ++++, so it is a quite small village. Because of our small village, my school is in the next village. Currently, I am in grade 9 at the grammar school in ++++. My favourite subjects are: History, Chemistry and Physical Education. Some of my teachers lead the ‚Theater-AG‘ (kann ich auch nicht weiterhelfen) and I participate in it. I always liked acting and finally, I am in the ‚Theater-AG‘ since one year.
At the end of a school day, you will hardly find me at home. Because school finishs in Germany at about 3 o’clock p.m, pupils have a lot of free time in the afternoon.
In my free time I spend a lot of time with my friends, watching movies, playing or listening to music or going to the cinema, or doing a lot of hobbies like gymnastics. I take part of a gymnastics club since grade 1 and I have already won a few medals. If I do not participate in the gymnastics training, I will jump or train myself new tricks on our huge trampoline. Additionally, I play keyboard. Even if I sometimes practice a little bit careless, I also have much fun. I also like reading. Actually, I like every kind of books but I prefer fantasy-novels.
Cooking is one of my passions, so I try to help my mother as often as I can.
In my high-school year, I hope that I get acquainted with the American cuisine and that I learn new tips and tricks.
Eventually, I hope I could bring you myself a bit nearer and I also hope that you will be excited to get friends of mine. (finde ich persönlich ansprechender)
Thank you for spending time on my letter. I am really happy having the opportunity to go to the USA!
Your sincerly,
Christyn
(ich hätte einen persönlicheren Abschluss schöner gefunden, sowas wie GREETINGS FROM GERMANY! Yours, …)
Im Großen und Ganzen ist dein Brief ganz okay. Die Verbesserungen von mir, kannst du ja einfach mal überschauen, aber ich bin weder Engländer noch irgendein Profi in sowas. Ich hab mir einfach mal gedacht, besser als ncihts
Also, ich würde halt noch mehr über dich schreiben, sowas, was du an deiner Schule magst und was deine Ziele so im Leben sind und deine Freunde, wie die dich beschreiben. So Tipps habe ich zB von meiner Orga bekommen.
Liebe Grüße,
Paula
hey
ich hätt den brief noch ein bissle länger gemacht weil die gastfamilie ja nur an dem brief und deinen fotos entscheidet ob sie dich nehmen will.
Schreib doch noch so was wie was du mit deiner Familie unternimmst, wie alt deine Schwester ist und wie eure beziehung zueinander ist,was deine Eltern arbeiten warum du genau in dein Gastland willst und was du dir von deinem ATj erhoffst oder warum du ein atj machen willst oder welche songs du am liebsten auf dem keyboard spielst auch kannst du noch was über deine Freunde reinschreiben und was du gerne mit denen machst
Ich werd wahrscheinlich noch ein bissl was dazuschreiben, aber bei meiner orga ist es so, dass man den host family letter schreiben soll und 7 Fragen beantworten muss, wo zu ´Beispiel meine Umgebung schon beschrieben ist. Aber trotzdem danke
First of all I want to say thank you for reading this letter and for give me a chance to spend almost a year with you. I want to spend a year in the USA to experience the culture and to improve my English skills.
My name is Christyn and I am 14 years old now. I live together with my parents and my sister ++++ in the south-east of Germany in ++++.++++ only got 4,000 inhabitants so it is a quite small village. Because our village is so small, my school is in the next village. Currently I am in grade 9 on the grammar school in +++++. My favourite subjects are: History, Chemistry and Physical Education. Some of my teachers lead the drama club I am in. I always liked acting and finally since one year I am in the drama club. After finishing school I would like to study but at the moment I am very unfixed about what I want to study. Maybe the high-school year will help me to get concrete future-plans.
When school ends, you will hardly find me at home. Because schools finish in Germany at about 3 o’clock p.m., pupils have a lot of free time in the afternoon. In my free time I spend a lot of time with my friends, watching movies, playing or listening to music or go to the cinema, or I do a lot of hobbies like gymnastics. I am in a gymnastics club since grade 1 and I already won a few medals. When I am not in the gymnastics training I often jump or train myself new tricks on our huge trampoline. Additionally I play keyboard. Even if I practice a little bit careless sometimes, I have fun at playing keyboard. I also like reading. Actually I like every kind of books but I prefer fantasy-novels.
Cooking is one of my passions so I try to help my mother as often as I can at cooking.
In my high-school year I hope that I get acquainted with the American cuisine and that I learn new tips and tricks.
Eventually, I hope I could bring you myself a bit nearer and I also hope that you will be excited to get friends of mine.
Thank you for spending time on my letter! I am really happy having the opportunity to go to the USA!
