vom 10.12.2014 22:01
S. J.

Hostfamily letter

Hey ihr lieben :)
Endlich ist mein Dear Hostfamily letter fertig. ich hab mich echt schwer getan :/
Nun wäre es super lieb, wenn jemand mal drüber lesen könnte. Mit der Grammatik hab ich es leider überhaupt nicht :(
Bin über jede Hilfe dankbar :)


Dear host family,

First of all I want to thank you taking time to read my letter. In the following lines I want to tell you something about me. My name is XX and I was born on the xxth of October 19xx in Germany. I live in XX, a small town in the northwest of Germany near the northsea together with my parents. We live in a house with a big garden, near the centre. I have two older sisters Christina and Elisa, they are 26 and 24 years old. Also i have three nephews Nick (4 years), Noah (3 years) and Ben ( 1 year) and one niece Haylie (1 year).
At the moment i am going to the profrssional school. I will finish my education as a nursey school teacher in summer of 2015. Ater that i want to be an Au Pair in America. I want i scine more than two years. It is a great chance for me to see different cultures and provide my english skills. I think it is a great thing to be an au pair, because you can learn a lot about the typical way of life, the people and about yourself, I want to know how your family lives and i would very happy to be a part of it.
After my Year as a Au Pair in your family i want to begin a second education in a childrens hospital.In my Opinion it the most interesting think to work with medicine and with children at once. I love to help people, specialy to help children to be healthy.

In my freetime i like to go out and meet friends. My best freinds are named Darleen, Celina and Anki. They are very important for me and we have very much fun together. I like to go swim or inline skating , too. And very often i enjoy to have a interesting , fantasy book and go in dreams of this wolrds.Sometimes I read all day long if the book is exciting
I spend very much of my freetime with kids. I like to go outside with my nephews and my niece. No matter witch weather it is. It is the best feeling to see them happy. My sisters and i have a very good relationship. If we had time we are going out at play billiard or go swimming together.
I have two mouses, there names are Opa Gerke and Baumann. I would (400)be very happy if your family have pets.

I have my drivers license since july 2014. It is not very long, but i drive every day 20 kilometers to school and back. I am a very safety driver, particularly if childrens drives in my car, too.


My friends and my family would discribing me as a friendly and helpful girl. I am very responsibly amd Honesty and empathy are very important for me, too
I would like to thanks for welcoming in your family for one year now and giving me the chance to know how an American family lives. I hope I will become a member of the family, I can be a big sister for one year and to gain new experiences.

I am an upfront with others and I am willing to learn new things, I was very pleased if I could do a year as an Aupair. 

Yours sincerely, 

S.J

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Ich habe mal probiert es zu verbessern...

Dear host family,

First of all I want to thank you for taking the time to read my letter. In the following letter I want to tell you something about myself. My name is XX and I was born on the xxth of October 19xx in Germany. Me and my parents live in XX, a small town in the northwest of Germany near the northsea. We live in a house with a big garden, near the centre of my hometown (?). I have two older sisters Christina and Elisa, they are 26 and 24 years old. I have three nephews Nick (4 years), Noah (3 years) and Ben ( 1 year) and one niece Haylie (1 year) as well.
At the moment I am going to a professional School where I will finish my education as a nursey school teacher(?) in summer of 2015. Aterwards i want to be an Au Pair in America. I want i scine (?) more than two years. It is a great chance for me to get to knowa different culture and improve my english skills. I think it is great to be an au pair because you can learn a lot about the typical way of life and the people in a different Country as well as yourself. I want to know how your family lives and I would be happy to be a part of your life.
After my Year as an Au Pair in your family I want to begin a second education in a childrens hospital. In my Opinion it is the most interesting thing to work with medicine and with children at once. I love to help people, especially to help children to stay healthy.

In my freetime I like to go out and meet friends. My best friends are named Darleen, Celina and Anki. They are very important to me and we enjoy hanging out together. I like to go swim or inline skating. I like to read interesting fantasy books and get deeper into their dreamworlds. Sometimes I read all day long if the book is really exciting to me.
I spend very much of my freetime with kids. I like to go outside with my nephews and my niece, no matter what weather it is. It is the best feeling to see them happy. My sisters and I have a very good relationship. If we have time enjoy a game of billiard or go swimming together.
I have two mouses (mieces?)and their names are Opa Gerke and Baumann. I would (400)be very happy if your family has pets.

I have my drivers license since July 2014. I don'T have it very long but i drive every day to school and back (20 kilometers ). I am a very safe driver, particularly if childrens are in the car.

My friends and my family would describe me as a friendly and helpful girl. I am very responsible, honest and empathatic (?).

I would like to thank you for welcoming me in your family for one year and giving me the chance to explore the every day life of an American Family. I hope I will become a member of your Family. I will be a big sister to your kids for one year and gain new experiences.

I am an upfront (?) with others and I am willing to learn new things. I would be very thankful to be an Au Pair to your Family for one year.

Yours sincerely,

S.J

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Ich habe mal ein bisschen was verbessert, aber ich kann mich ja auch vertuen. Ich hoffe ich konnte dir damit helfen. Bei manchen Stellen habe ich ein Fragezeichen hingeschrieben, weil ich mir nicht sicher war, was du dort meinst.

Viel Erfolg bei der Verwirklichung deines Traumes

Brief

Hallo!

Ich habe korrigiert, was mir aufgefallen ist. Sicher sind noch immer einige Fehler darin, aber es ist nicht nötig, einen grammatikalisch perfekten Gastfamilienbrief zu schreiben.

Viele Grüße und viel Erfolg bei der Gastfamiliensuche,

Marie-Claire




Dear host family,

first of all, I would like to thank you for taking some time to read my letter. In the following lines I want to tell you something about me. My name is XX and I was born on the xxth of October 19xx in Germany. I live in XX, a small town in the northwest of Germany, close to North Sea, together with my parents. We live in a house with a big garden, near the city centre. I have two older sisters, Christina and Elisa, 26 and 24 years old. Also I have three nephews – Nick (4 years old), Noah (3 years old) and Ben (1 year old) – and my niece Haylie (one year).
At the moment I attend a professional school to become a nursery school teacher. In Summer 2015 that I would like to go to the USA as an au pair. It is a great chance for me to see experience a foreign culture and improve my English. I think it is great to be an au pair because one can learn a lot about the way of life, about the people and about yourself. I would like to know about your daily life and would be very happy to be a part of your family.
Afterwards I would like to work at a children`s hospital. In my opinion it is very interesting to work with medicine and children at once. I love to help people, especially to help children to recover.

In my spare time I like to meet friends. My best friends are Darleen, Celina and Anki. They are very important to me and we have a lot of fun together. I like to go swimming or inline skating , too. And very often I enjoy to read an interesting fantasy book . Sometimes I read all day long if the book is exciting.
I spend very much time with kids. I like to go outside with my nephews and my niece in all weathers. I really enjoy watching them laughing. My sisters and I get a long with each other very well. We enjoy playing billiard or go swimming together.
I`ve got two mice, their names are „Opa Gerke“ and „Baumann“. I would be very happy if you owned pets, too.

I have a driver licence since July 2014. Every day I drive about 20 kilometers to school and back home. I am a very careful driver, particularly together with children.

My friends and my family would discribe me as a friendly and helpful girl. I am very responsible, and honesty and empathy are very important to me, too. I am very open-hearted and willing to learn new things.
I would like to thank you for welcoming me and giving me the chance to get to know daily life in the USA. I hope I will become a member of your family. I would love to be a big sister for one year and gain new experiences.

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