Hostfamily letter

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Könnt ihr mir ein wenig Helfen beim Hostfamily Brief ?

Ich bin fast fertig aber das Ende ich weiß nicht wie ich es schreiben soll naja hier erstmal der Brief es wäre echt super wenn jemand von euch mal drüber gucken könnt :slight_smile:

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Alicia

Dear Host family,

Thank you for reading this letter it means a lot to me.
My Name is Alicia and I’m 17 years old.
My friends and would describe me as a helpful, ambitious and a little bit crazy person.
My relationship to my parents is o.k. My parents don’t live together because they split when I was 5 years old. My mom have a new husband called Juergen I live with them in a house and Juergen is more my father then my real dad. To my dad I have contact but not that much he did stupid things in the past but I’m ok with that. I don’t have siblings and the rest of my family (my mother’s side) live not near so we just meet 2 or 3 times a year. The family from my father’s side live near I meet my grandma often but she’s the only member is seeing often from dad’s family side.
I have a strong friendship to my best friends Lorena and Denise. Lorena does not go to my school but we try to see us more because she lives not far away from my home. We both go to a reading club and love the British bands One Direction and Little Mix.
Denise and I know each other since birth. We had long time no contact but since we are in class 7 or 8. Now we have more contact and go often to the cinema or spend our summers inside her swimming pool. We are now in the same class and spend a lot time together.
I have a special hobby it’s a Facebook side called “Hunger Games Germany” since 2012 I’m admin on the page and since December 2012 I’m the “leader“. At the 11th November I went to the German Movie Premiere in Berlin and meet the main cast of the movie (Jennifer Lawrence,Josh Hutcherson,Liam Hemsworth and Elisabeth Banks and director Francis Lawrence) because “Hunger Games Germany” is the biggest unofficial fan page in Germany .The side is very important to me because I have achieved so much through the side and the Team is always there for me it’s like a little Family.
My other hobby is the book club I visit every month with my friend Lorena. The club is from a bookstore and we read the books and rate them. In the club are Girls and Boys from year 8-17 and our rates are online on the website of the bookstore. I post all my ratings on my blog and I plan to blog about my year in USA too.
And my last big hobby is the music I play guitar for 3 years now. (but not very good) I love to make music with my friends. Music is really important to me since I’m “Directioner” I’m a big “One Direction” fan and I can play few songs of them and I know all their lyrics. Please don’t think I’m crazy in the bad way sometimes I freak out a bit about them and my room is full of posters of them but I don’t stalk them or something I’m just a fangirl like million other on this planet. The Fandom is like a family to me and very important for me because the Band I knew beautiful people.
I applied with AFS because I want to know how the “real” America is. I want to discover if all prejudices about the American life is false like the prejudices about Germany. I wanted to go to America for a long time it’s my dream since I’m 11 years old .And I want to learn English because I think that English is very important and nothing is better than an exchange year to learn it.
In my future I want to study “Management and Marketing” (Public Relations) because I make all PR things for Hunger Games Germany and I have contact to a lot companies. I have a lot fun and I think it’s a cool job.
I have to say that I’m when imp home I’m most of the time not 100% properly but I think every teenager have a messy room. But when I’m at my friends house I can’t see when its untidy and I help to clean up. I can clean up I just say that because I don’t want you to think I’m very messy.

Hallo,
Ich hab heute auch meinen Brief geschrieben und mein ende ist dieses hier:
„I really thank you for reading this letter and for hosting with YFU. I hope you will be MY host family!
Best regards, Kathrin“

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