hallo:)
könnt ihr mir bitte helfen meinen gastelternbrief zu überarbeiten und auch ratschläge geben was noch fehlt oder weggelassen werden sollte ?
ich finde ihn nicht so gut es ist alles irgendwie unstruckturiert und grammatikalisch falsch!
ICH BENÖTIGE DIRINGEND HILFE!!
Vielen dank im voraus 
Dear guest parents,
First of all i want to thank you for taking time for reading my letter and for getting to know me better.
i try to do my best to tell you about my life here in germany.
I know I am supposed to write something about myself but this is not very easy for me to do. I think it’s always very difficult to write about personal things, not only because they are personal, but also because they are hard to describe. Well I’ll try my best and I hope I can give you a good impression of myself and the things that are important for me
My name is XXX. I am 15 years old , i live with my parents and my 2 older brothers in the small town ‘XXX’, a city 1 hour from XXX and 1 and a half hour from XXX, located in the north-western part of germany.
I get along with my borthers very well but sometimes it is hard for me, because i am the only girl and i would like to have a sister.
My oldest brother, XXXl, is going to university in XXX which is almost 2 hours away.
My 18 year old brother, XXX and me are going to the same school.
I attend in the 9th class and my favourite subjekts are english and sport.
Our school system is very different from that in canada!
Here we don’t have subjects like fashion, photography or web design. And i think its pretty cool and a good variety !I am really looking forward to my first American school day. I especially like that there is so much sport offered after school and that you can take the courses you want.
I decided to go to Canada for An exchange year a long time ago! I always wanted to do this and finally i am in the right age
I am really thankful that my parents give me the oppertunity to make my dream possible because this is very important to me.
I have been to Canada one time. This summer i went to Toronto for 3 weeks in a language-camp with people from all over the world and it was a great experience!
In my free time i like to meet my friends, watching DVD’s (i’m a fan of romantic movies but I don’t like thrillers), go horseback riding and to dance ballet. I used to go dp athletics ,too. An important part in my life is music!
When i was younger i used to sing in a choir and now i am taking singing lessons.
My dream is to connect singing with my job
In the winter i like to snowboard, but i am not really good in it because my friends and me started snowboaring last year on our own.
I started balett when i was six years old and i still have fun. I also like reading a lot!
On some days I just spend my free time with reading! I have many favourite books, of course the twillight saga but also a lot books from sarah dessen for example ‘just listen’.
I’m really looking forward to this 5 months and I hope that I will have an awesome time, which I will never forget and that it will be a great experience for me.
Finally I want to thank you again for reading my letter and if you should give me the opportunity to spend with you a great time in Vancouver, I’d do my best as a family member.
Best greetings from Austria,
XXX
