Brief

Jaa, ich weiß, es gibt schon 10tausend threads, aber ich wüsste einfach gerne, was ihr von meinem hostfam-letter denkt. Der darf übrigens nur eine Seite lang sein, ist sogar mit Ramen um das Blatt begrenzt, deswegen nicht so ausfürlich.

Dear Hostfamily,

First of all I would like to thank you for thinking about taking me as an exchange student. I am really keen on getting to know New Zealand and its culture.

My name is Maria Kainz and I am living together with my mother in munich wich is the third biggest city of Germany.
I love travelling to other cities and countries and also learning more about the people who are living there.
One of my hobbies is reading books. Like so many other kids I first read Harry Potter and then never stopped. At the moment my favourite one is twilight and its instalment new moon written by Stephenie Meyer. Here it is really popular with the people (Maybe you know it, too?).
I am also into acting because the feeling when you are on stage and it doesnt matter to you what all the other people think of you and youre just having a great time is wonderful. Last year I was part of my schoolsdrama group nad we were doing Shakespeares "A midsummernightsdream" with some great music (including everything from childrenssongs to Elton John`s „can you feel the love tonight“). Unfortunately I could not do it this year because I had already taken Italian and mentoring (which I also enjoy) as extracurricular activities.
But the most important thing to me is having all my friends.
For sure it will be hard to leave them for such a long time, but I am sure that I will enjoy staying with you in New Zealand next year.
I am looking forward to it so much and I can not wait to get on the plane!

Yours sincerely, Maria Kainz.

also…
vielleicht solltest du nicht sagen „about taking me as an exchange student“ sondern eher „pick“ benutzen und nicht „exchange student“ sondern „future family member“.

muinich which (ich denke is nur ein tippfehler)

"Here it is really popular with the people "
geht das??
was meinst du damit??

„Unfortunately I could not do it this year because I had already taken Italian and mentoring (which I also enjoy) as extracurricular activities.“
also hier wird nicht klar ob du das in der schule machst wieder warum kannst du das dieses jahr nicht machen???

"But the most important thing to me is having all my friends. "

meinst du, dass du dich gerne mit ihnen triffst oder dass du sie gerne hast?? oder so??

"I am looking forward to it so much "
schreib lieber, was du gerne möchtest!

und ich denke ,dass sich „yours sincerely“ bisschen zu streng anhört besser wäre einfach nur „yours“ oder sowas!!!

ach ja bei welcher orga ist das=???
ich meine ein 1-seitiger brief ist echt wenig und ich mein ja nur der brief entscheidet, in welcher gastfamilie du für… wohnst!!

lg
vicky

ach ja und sind alles nur kleine verbesserungsvorschläge im großen udsbn ganzen war es sonst sehr gut!!:wink: