Brief an die Gastfamilie

Also ich habe heute endlich den Brief an meine gastfamilie geschrieben…

Könnt ihr mir mal paar verbesserungs vorschläge gebe und eure Meinung dazu…wäre echt nett!!

Dear hostfamily,

First of all I want to thank you to accept me as a new family member into your home for a couple of month. In the following lines I would like to introduce myself and tell you something about my family, my hobbies and everyday life.

My name is Eileen and I live togehter with my big family, my parents, my two brothers and my two sisters in a house in *****, a small city in the west of Germany. My siblings are my triplet brother Kevin, my triplet sister Vivien, my younger sister Emily and my youngest brother Maik and I am triplet child. I am going to a secondary school called „****************“ in *****. My sister Vivien and I both go to the same school in the same grade. I am a student in the 9th grade. My favourite subjects are English and Sport. After school I am going to make my final secondary-school examination.

I think the relationship between my parents and me is usually very good, because I can tell them everything and they help me to solve my problems.There is a good relationship between our family members. We often spend our holidays together and do things at the weekend. We play at the weekend volleyball and sometimes with friends or go to ice-skate or many other things. In the summer holidays we often travel to the Baltic Sea and we are nearly all day long at the beach and swimming or relaxing in the sun. My sister Vivien is very close to me and we do almost all things togehter,we often ride a bicycle and talk about many things.

In my free time I like to spend time with my family and friends or do my hobbies.
My hobbies are playing volleyball, go swimming, reading books and inline skating.
I play in a volleyball team twice week, which is hard but also a lot of fun.

I want to make a exchange year, because I am very interested in other culture and really interested in your country. I think the school system in U.S. is different from ours. I would like to know how they are different and I expect to improve my language skills and become a more independet person.
My friends would describe me as a honest, sportive and helpful person.

I am looking forward to getting to know you.

Yours sincerely, Eileen *****

Hallo Eileen,

ich habe mal einige Rechtschreibsachen verbessert und einige Dinge umgeschrieben und gekürzt.
Vielleicht solltest du noch mehr zu deinen Beweggründen und deinem Charakter schreiben und deine Vollyball-Gruppe noch näher beschreiben (machst du das professionell, also mit Teilnahme an Turnieren und so, oder nur zum Spaß ?).

Dear hostfamily,

First of all I would like to thank you for giving me the chance to become a part of your family for a couple of months. In the following lines I would like to introduce myself to you and tell you something about my family, my hobbies and my everyday life.

My name is Eileen and I live togehter with my big family - my parents, my two brothers and my two sisters - in a house in *****, a small city in westhern Germany. Currently I attend the 9th grade a secondary school called „****************“ in *****.

Usually I get along well with my parents as I can tell them everything and they always try to help me to solve my problems. My sister Vivien and me attend the same grade at the same school and we have got a very close relationship. We do lots of things together and and I can talk to her about everything.

In my spare time I spend a lot of time with my friends and my family. We often go ice-skating or swimming or play volleyball.
During the summer holidays I often travel the Baltic Sea region with my family and we spend a lot of time at the beach there.
Furthermore I enjoy inline-skating and reading and (…). From time to time it`s pretty hard but it is also a lot of fun.

I want to go abroad for one year because I would love to experience the US-American culture. I would like to get to know the school system, improve my English and become more independent.

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I am looking forward to meeting you !

Yours sincerely, Eileen *****

Vielleicht helfen dir meine Korrekturen ein bisschen.

Viele Grüße und schon mal ganz viel Spaß da drüben,

Marie-Claire

Danke das für deine Korrekturen,dann werde ich mein text mal überarbeiten :grinning: