Gastfamilienbrief verbesserungsvorschläge?

Guten Tag alle miteinander,

Nun ist es soweit und ich muss einen Gastafmilienbrief schreiben, allerdings für meine Gastafmilie, die ich NOCH NICHT habe :cry:
Habt ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge oder Umänderungen? :confounded:
Besonders weil ich mich für ein Stipendium bei Ayusa bewerbe, möchte ich natürlich, das alles perfekt ist :+1:

Dear hostfamily,

My Name is xx xx and I am sixteen years old. I am living in a little city near cologne which is called xx with about 15.000 citizens. I write to you because I want to learn more about your culture and your daily life. I would be very glad, if you a short impression of me and my life here in Germany.

I am living in a house with my mother and my stepfather. My brother is studying in Dortmund on ISM. (International School of Management) My mother work as a Projectassistance and my stepfather as a Information Technology Expert for Industrie.I am in the 10th grade at a high school and my favourite subjects are Math, chemistry and English.

At home I have to do tasks all day, like wash the dishes and tidy up my room. Moreover, I learn all day for school to get good notes. When everything is done I meet my friends to go swimming or just hanging up, cook or read a book which makes me fun.My friends say that I am friendly, open, ambitious, thankful and have a open mind.

I think you imagine the question, why I would like to live a whole year in the USA. That’s a easy question for me. My uncle live in the USA and when I was eleven I went to my uncle in the winter holidays and at this moment, I am impressed at this country. I like the people there and the fact that everything is so big.

I am happy that I have no allergies, so it is no problem for me to live with dogs, cats, horses or others together. Indeed I don’t eat any meat although is it no problem for me when others eat meat when I , for example, sit in front of them who are eating meat.

I know that the most americans going on sundays in church because they are mostly religious. Altough I am not religious but is it not a problem for me, to go on sundays in church because I want as much as possible to integrate me in your familiy!

I have so much questions to you that i want to ask. Am I have host siblings? If yes, are they going to the school which will my school then too? Do you have pets? Am I have my own room? Whats are the hobbys of your familiy? It is often sunny where you live?

I am so thankful that you admit me in your family! I know, we’ll have a lot of fun together and hope you thing the same. I have so much anticipation to get you know!

Annika Hans